jaycet ([info]jaycet) wrote,
@ 2008-07-06 02:32:00
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{Semipoem} Thoughts of you on a Rainy Day
Wind sweeps past the panes,
Glass wet, droplets hang.
A hundred folded paper cranes,
Smiled over, songs sang.
Hands folded on lap,
Docile day, photo day.
Your kisses marking a map,
Down my body, all the way.
The way you sparkle when we meet,
Eyes lock, hugs overdue.
Sometimes all I really need,
Is a thought of you, just of you.

[c: 0232h, 060708]
A/N: No, it's not actually raining at the moment. Yes, I just wanted to write something. And kind of prove that I can write in ABAB verse (yes, the last one's a half-rhyme), though doublets will always be easiest. XD




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[info]forlorness
2008-07-06 06:07 pm UTC (link)
Not a fan of sonnets but I like the imagery. Not sure how a hundred folded paper cranes fits in with the overall idea. Anyway don't mind me sonnets and haikus make me cranky.

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[info]jaycet
2008-07-07 01:13 am UTC (link)
It's a sonnet?! Lol I don't think it fits to the form right. XD

I think there's a myth about folding a hundred (or was it a thousand) paper cranes so you'll get a wish..for a loved one, in this case. :)

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[info]forlorness
2008-07-09 08:29 pm UTC (link)
My mistake I just assumed ABAB means sonnet for some reason.

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